支招小作文(177)I靜態表六個國家用水量對比

March 14, 2024雅思小作文系列 | 欄目推送說明分享雅思考試小作文真題范文。每一篇范文都經由專業團隊反復校對，最終外教審查定稿。成功就是日復一日那一點點小小努力的積累。[2024/ 3/ 9] The table compares the proportion of water usage for domestic industrial and agricultural purposes in six countries of the world in the year 2003.【主體段分段】：按照<國家>分段Body 1：Canada, Russia, UK【都在Industrial數據最高】Body 2：剩下3個國家【Australia→Domestic最高，China & Turkey→Agricultural最高】【開頭段】The table presents information about residential, industrial and agricultural water usage in six different countries for the year 2003.【概述段】It is clear thatin Canada, Russia and UK, more waterwas distributed inindustry,whileagricultural water usageaccounted for the largest partin China and Turkey. Australia was the only country wherepeople used most of the waterfor their daily life.思路要點：- Canada, Russia, UK：Industrial用水最多- China & Turkey：Agricultural用水最多- Australia：Domestic用水最多【Body 1】Looking at the information in more detail, we can find thatCanadians, Russians and British peopleused most of their water forindustrial process, with the figure in Canada exceeding 80%. Also, water used for the other two purposesshared a similar figurein the former two countries, with the figure of roughly 10% and 19% respectively.However,the proportion of domestic water usage in Britain(23%)was around 5 times as large asthe figure for agricultural water usage in this country.思路要點：Canada, Russia, UK- 工業用水最多，只有Canada的數據超過80%- Canada和Russia的domestic用水、agricultural用水數值相似，分別大約為10%和19%- UK：domestic用水大約是agricultural用水的5倍【Body 2】The figures in the other three countriesshowed a different pattern. The majority of water resourceswas allocated toagriculture in China and Turkey, with the figure of 87% and 73%.In both of these two countries,a similar figure could be foundin the water used for daily life and industry.In Australia, however,65% of the water went to domestic use,butwater consumption in industrial fieldrepresentedonly 2%.思路要點：- 其余三個國家，用水量分配呈現不同規律- China和Turkey：- 都是agricultural占比最高，分別是87%和73%- 這兩個國家內部residential和industrial：數據相似- Australia：Domestic用水有65%，但是Industrial用水僅占比2%